We everytime feel happy or pleasure when friends pay attention to my updating and most people thought this is the reason that they use SNS. Especially, SNS is important connector that can communicate with our friends (maybe new friends or girl, boy friends) these days. However, according to various article, many people feel lonely when they could not get attention in SNS. Furthermore many think that SNS is waste of time. Above all, it is recovered that SNS plays a role as heckler in their relationship. So I suggest 'SNS can not help people to maintain their relationship'. that is, It is my thesis.
First, I will inform the definition of SNS to make readers understand 'SNS‘. Second, I will summarize the reasearch I've done. What is SNS? SNS is abbreviation of 'social network service'. 'Social network service' means 'the community services which share information, make more personal connections.
summing-up which I've researched is that First, people feel self-contentment and great power mentality when they use SNS. Furthermore, They use SNS to maintain their acquaintanceship. However, 77% of university students feel 'SNS is waste of time' although 82% of college students are using SNS (They use SNS one hour for one day). They also feel lonely when there is no attention to their updating contrariwise. For these res earch, I can argue that 'SNS can not help people to maintain their relationship' certainly.
I will start by examining how SNS give people a sense of alienation rather than better relationship. According to many articles, people feel lonely when they use SNS. How? people find new friends and they discuss policy and share their daily. It is unbelievable. However, many people feel this phenomenon and many experts suggest that SNS causes sense of deprivation
In Busan university, 황성욱·박재진 professors investigated about 'the psychological problem of facebook'. The result was that people have stress that was made by the light relationship that is maintained only in facebook. Furthermore, they have feeling of loss when they watch embellished daily of friends. Lastly, they also have pressure that they must update their daily falsely.
In real case, Mr Lee (30 years old, live in ulsan) removed all Social network services which he used. He told "When I use SNS, all people who is SNS friends are look like happy except me." , "Friends update their new car pictures, trip pictures and these make me have a sense of inferiority.."
a department of neuropsychiatry doctor mentioned that "SNS make people have complex and compared consciousness"
I will examine SNS is the place of instigation.
This phenomenon may implant the negative prejudice to friends, politician and so on. Therefore, it rather spoil relationship. According to one of article about SNS, Lee moon won who is the editor-in-chief of 'media watch' mentioned that "twitter is getting extreme to instigate rumor, political false truth very autistically and extremly". Furthermore, he said "Although twitter is small social network service, through celebrities, it functions as secondary article production factory and it means twitter functions as issuing system for a political struggle"
The users of twitter are about 60,000 and about 10,000 users are using twitter in quality. So it was surprised that twitter is used as issuing system. It implies that SNS gives negative prejudice to relationship. In my case, sometimes my MCH friends update inflammatory writing to attack his or her other friends.
I will examine SNS ,rather, spoils the real relationship (offline relatinship).
In real case, it is common situation that your facebook friends cut relationship between you and he or her. They say 'because you act so friendly only in online.'
Furthermore, people said that they don't like SNS friends who share their depression, rage and so on although these things are important to people who want to share their emotion with friends.
Like this, rather SNS activity can spoil real relationship. According to result of public survey of 'the America character and social psychology association' , people feel unhappy when they watch friends' good news through SNS.
Furthermore, in haverford college, one experts said the more we update our daily too much, the more our friends think you are rebarbative.
This result implies that we must check our SNS life if we want to maintain good relationship in offline life.
I concede that SNS may be easier to meet friends rather than offline. regardless of age, meticulosity, place and time , they can meet easily and it means SNS is the best place to meet your friends. However, too many activities on SNS spoil your relationship. already I mentioned many evidences. This usability rather spoil you relationship. You will lose your real friends if you concentrate on online friends. Furthermore, SNS is the best place where it implants wrong prejudice.
I will close with a summary of my previous points, Social network service rather spoils the real relationship (offline relatinship) and SNS is the place of instigation, so it implant the wrong prejudice about your friends or famous person. Furthermore, SNS can make people pay no attention to offline friends. Through this reasons, I argue that SNS is harmful to maintain relationship.
1. 77% of university students feel “SNS is waste of time”
http://www.daejeontoday.com/news/articleView.html?idxno=330514
2. 82% of college students "are using SNS "
http://www.jemin.com/news/articleView.html?idxno=340698
3. college students use SNS (one hour for one day)
http://www.etoday.co.kr/news/section/newsview.php?idxno=918311
4. rather They feel lonely through SNS.
http://www.ilyosisa.co.kr/news/articleView.html?idxno=69058
5. If there is no attention, they feel pain
http://www.mediapen.com/news/articleView.html?idxno=39702
7. The reason - using SNS
http://navercast.naver.com/magazine_contents.nhn?rid=1103&contents_id=52743
pay no attention to real friends
http://navercast.naver.com/magazine_contents.nhn?rid=2026&rid=&contents_id=63250
a sense of alienation
http://www.ulsan-news.com/sub_read.html?uid=11502§ion=sc15§ion2=%BF%EF%BB%EANews
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